- Editing the first draft of the magazine advertisement
Editing the first draft of the magazine advertisement
1. Laurie AmosEditing the first draft of the magazine advertisementBelow is the first draft of the magazine advertisement that I have created.Although I like the first draft, there are a few minor changes that I intend onmaking to the design of it, including making the album name Vengeancestand out more. In order to do this I decided I wanted to change the Characterspacing. Here: This allows the title to look like this, which I prefer as although it is a smaller font it stills spreads almost the size of the title, making it more noticeable. 2. Laurie AmosI have also changed the font decoration here, including:Font style before: Calibri, changed to Cambria because Calibri font appearedtoo structured and formal, which I thought was unsuitable for the band andtheme.Font size before: 16pt, changed to 20pt as it could be seen better and muchclearer when it was bigger.As you can see below I also changed the font colour of this text, as it was whitebefore it looked too bright for the dark image, so I changed it to a faint grey colour so that it blends with the image more, yet its still possible to read the text. Due to resizing the text I also had to position it higher on the page, this is an advantage as it looks better on the image and also makes the text easier to see.